OT: (KIND OF)Paper I wrote for school

[rabid frog]

Let me know what you guys think.... is it sound advice?? It does have links to other sites but that was the criteria for the paper

 

[plum70rt]

Very good, gives the general important information and Ideas

 

[rabid frog]

thanks, it was a hard paper to write becuase we could not give our opinions. I hate writing papers.... many more to do in the next four years.

 

[leigh]

looks good to me--but if your teacher isn't familiar with salt water tanks you might want to explain some of the phrases you use--i was just trying to read from the point of view of someone with no knowledge of the subject and i'd have no idea what a sump is or what nitrates/trites/ammonia/ph have to do with fish tanks and why having levels of them during the cycle period is bad and such...

 

[michelle13]

You might want to include something on how to start a cycle.