Please gently critique.
- Thread starter cranberry
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spiderwoman
Active Member
Looks very professional! And this is a professional opinion and I'm not going easy on you 
rebelprettyboy
Active Member
They all look very well done! Good job.
J
jjs
Guest
Really nice job. Makes me want to buy snails!
goober_hunter
Member
looks good , are you doing a project??
socal57che
Active Member
Originally Posted by Cranberry
http:///forum/post/2771810
Thanks. It's going to be a little CUC series......
I would have never guessed that...
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http:///forum/post/2771810
Thanks. It's going to be a little CUC series......
I would have never guessed that...
.
jeanheckle
Member
OK, don't hate me, but I don't think the title of the first one sounds as professional as the others.
netimreefer
Member
looks professional to me and that is a novice opinion
cranberry
Active Member
Originally Posted by jeanheckle
http:///forum/post/2774109
OK, don't hate me, but I don't think the title of the first one sounds as professional as the others.
*gets on intercom*
Lane 3, taking all suggestions...... no line. No wait.
http:///forum/post/2774109
OK, don't hate me, but I don't think the title of the first one sounds as professional as the others.
*gets on intercom*
Lane 3, taking all suggestions...... no line. No wait.
jaymz
Member
Originally Posted by jeanheckle
http:///forum/post/2774109
OK, don't hate me, but I don't think the title of the first one sounds as professional as the others.
Its the word 'critters' . Choosing a Common Cleanup Crew.. would matchup with the others better.
http:///forum/post/2774109
OK, don't hate me, but I don't think the title of the first one sounds as professional as the others.
Its the word 'critters' . Choosing a Common Cleanup Crew.. would matchup with the others better.
reefkprz
Active Member
I think the first ones title needs to be changed. some thing more along the lines of choosing a basic clean up crew, or choosing your starting cleanup crew, choosing common clean up critters just sounds lacsidasical.
I like the fonts and the pictures are great, the last one possibly the outline color of the font should be changed to contrast the blue in the snail as opposed to matching it. you lose the the effect of the outline due to the blue on blue.
just my thoughts on it, overall very nice.
I like the fonts and the pictures are great, the last one possibly the outline color of the font should be changed to contrast the blue in the snail as opposed to matching it. you lose the the effect of the outline due to the blue on blue.
just my thoughts on it, overall very nice.
jeanheckle
Member
Originally Posted by Jaymz
http:///forum/post/2775282
Its the word 'critters' . Choosing a Common Cleanup Crew.. would matchup with the others better.
Thats what I was thinking...even use critters but... "Critters...choosing a common cleanup crew"
http:///forum/post/2775282
Its the word 'critters' . Choosing a Common Cleanup Crew.. would matchup with the others better.
Thats what I was thinking...even use critters but... "Critters...choosing a common cleanup crew"
cranberry
Active Member
Originally Posted by Jaymz
http:///forum/post/2775282
Its the word 'critters' . Choosing a Common Cleanup Crew.. would matchup with the others better.
Got it.
Originally Posted by saltn00b
http:///forum/post/2775288
and consider a different font altogether.
I just bought a photoshop font plug-in. Flying Pear razor Pro thingy.... LOL.
Originally Posted by jeanheckle
http:///forum/post/2775329
"Critters...choosing a common cleanup crew"
Was trying to keep a verb as the first word to tie them together. I'll ditch the critters though. Unless that theme doesn't work. Unfortunately that was Part I and is already gone to the "printing press". It'll have to wait until round number 2. Pooey.
http:///forum/post/2775282
Its the word 'critters' . Choosing a Common Cleanup Crew.. would matchup with the others better.
Got it.
Originally Posted by saltn00b
http:///forum/post/2775288
and consider a different font altogether.
I just bought a photoshop font plug-in. Flying Pear razor Pro thingy.... LOL.
Originally Posted by jeanheckle
http:///forum/post/2775329
"Critters...choosing a common cleanup crew"
Was trying to keep a verb as the first word to tie them together. I'll ditch the critters though. Unless that theme doesn't work. Unfortunately that was Part I and is already gone to the "printing press". It'll have to wait until round number 2. Pooey.
whyamisofl
Active Member
Originally Posted by Cranberry
http:///forum/post/2771810
Thanks. It's going to be a little CUC series......
where will this be located?
http:///forum/post/2771810
Thanks. It's going to be a little CUC series......
where will this be located?