Looks good. But mag return pumps are very loud, take up alot of electricity, and just not very good pumps IMO. I would go with a eheim 1262 or ocean runner 3500. And I would put a T before the scwd that goes back to the sump with a ball valve so you can turn back the amount of water going into the tank for if your overflow cant handle the flow. And I do not think you need that many outlets for your return. I think two would be fine.