I see what your saying snakeblitz. after reading a few articles about fish I saw what you are talking about with the scientific name for all the fish. ill go through it and fix all that stuff like the "you" and the excessive use of transition words. but thank you for being patient with me...
hopefully spell check didn't fail me! this is what i got now
All about the humu trigger
Introduction:
The Humuhumunukunukuapua or “humu triggerfish” is one of the most interesting fish in this hobby. Befor we get started I have something to say about this trigger and its close...
so far I have broken down all the content into a couple sentence paragraphs that are indented. I think it allows every thing to be broken down and it isn't as much on the eyes as the big paragraphs. ill post it later today and hopefully it is ready.
thanks! i love flames too but every time i go to get one i end up leaving with another fish. ive tried two coral beautys and i couldnt get them to eat.
do you think i should make the font bigger or leave it? i already have it a little bigger but i dont know. im gona go through it a few more times and hopefuly it is done by tomorrow.
WOW thats a lot! the lemon peel was my other dwarf angel choice at my lfs. but im glad i went with the eibli, very cool fish. i wonder who will buy it. but the angel isnt eating yet on day two. unlike the tang that eats like a pig.